This one feels a bit more stilted than some of the other snips you've put up. I think it has something to do with the line(s) "But I haven't been able to find Him/Until I used Google Maps." Tense change maybe? I like the possible implication of religious symbolism by capitalizing Him. Maybe that's me reading too much into it. Love the lines "Reward for a street address/TBA" Just...works.
This one feels a bit more stilted than some of the other snips you've put up. I think it has something to do with the line(s) "But I haven't been able to find Him/Until I used Google Maps."
ReplyDeleteTense change maybe?
I like the possible implication of religious symbolism by capitalizing Him. Maybe that's me reading too much into it.
Love the lines "Reward for a street address/TBA"
Just...works.